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The Traveling Hamster - 林瑀倩 Tiffany Y.C.Lin

There was a hamster traveling the galaxy to eight planets.

First, she landed on “Water Planets”. Every thing she saw was made of water. She met some “water babies” and played happily with them. They even used water to write “water Planted”.

When she left there, the water babies gave her a “water Melon”.

Then, she arrived on Golf Planet. She felt surprised that everything was yellow. Whem she waled on Yellow Road, she fell and found a little gold.
Then she went ot a jewelry center.

She exchanged it at a jewelry center and got one cute yellow hat.

The third stop, she arrivied on Earth. She felt terrible and said, ”There are so many buildings here and the air isn’t fresh. I don’t like here!”

Next, she arrivied on - Wood Planet. It’s much more comfortable. I love here!” she said.
Everything was made of wood and that made her peaceful.

She quickly arrivied on Fire Planet. She felt so hot! All of the plants were dead. She looked into a pool and it was on fire! “That’s crazy,” she thought and she left.

After she went to Sand Planet. The roads were only made of sand. The hamster fell again when she walked. Her wound was covered with sand, but she didn’t feel any pain. Suddenly, the sand turned into skin.

She felt so amazed and took some sand with her, but when she left, it just disappeared!

Last, she arrivied on Ocean Planet. There was only an ocean. Pirates lived on a boat and danced a pirate dance.

The pirates invited her to dance with them.

She felt wonderful and had lots of memories from this journey.

THE END



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