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創作小書評審感言與建議

總評:

參賽學生展現其創意精神,作品比以往精緻,注重細節的鋪陳;題材多元,內容也比以往豐富許多。參賽學生語句的使用及文法表現,顯示英語實力有提升。老師指導有方,讓參賽者有很大的發揮空間,讓好的作品更好。

建議:

老師不要給予過多協助: 同一班學生在集體創作的同時,會相互影響,以致作品雷同。有部份作品內容不同,但外觀、封面的設計卻一樣。創作無價、參賽學生要尊重智慧財產: 部份作品與當紅動漫或故事雷同,應該避免。不要過度修飾參賽學生的文法、內容: 部份作品文法過度準確,但內容與圖形是設計簡單、草率的。要符合英文小書製作的風格: 由左至右翻閱,中文才是由右至左。文法與結構要更準確: 要注意拼字、標點符號的使用,部分故事結局過於草率,部分故事字句太少…等‧

主題繪畫評審感想與建議

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自由創作的要點除了繪畫技巧之外,還包含了對於主題掌握與想像力。

能得獎的同學,主要優點是能夠用畫面營造出一個明確的情景,而不是單純畫出芝麻街的角色,不管是幻想的情境,或是呈現自己的生活,都是很好的表現方式,充分展現了小朋友的想像力。

而沒能夠入選的同學,大多是情境表達這方面比較弱,或是整體畫面的完整度不足,譬如造型的掌握上以及配色上色較弱。"


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本次評選標準著重繪畫的敘事能力、畫面構成與繪畫技法的展現。因此優秀的作品中,多能看出參賽者們不只表現芝蔴街人物的造型,更能透過色彩、線條等各種視覺元素的構成來描寫情境或傳達出在芝蔴街學習的心情。

而在表現技巧上,因考量各參賽者發展階段的差異,仍會從同齡作品中比較造型與媒材的掌握度,以及畫面整體效果的表現來做評比。

所以,未入選或覺得表現不如預期的參賽者也無須在繪畫的路上灰心;經常觀摩他人作品、隨年齡增長日益豐富的生活經驗,並保持「用繪畫紀錄與表達」的習慣,相信一定能自我超越,建立獨特的藝術視野。"

主題繪畫優等作品,福山分校戴暐庭Ava

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芝蔴街星球 福山分校戴暐庭Ava W. T. Dai

主題繪畫優等作品,福山分校吳宛鍒Samantha

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芝蔴街帶我環遊世界去 福山分校吳宛鍒Samantha Y. R. Wu

主題繪畫優等作品,裕文分校沈冠穎Willson

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Happy Birthday, ELMO. 裕文分校沈冠穎Willson K. Y. Shen

主題繪畫優等作品,員林奧大分校曹慈恩Allie

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芝蔴街朋友 員林奧大分校曹慈恩Allie

主題繪畫優等作品,員林奧大分校李依潔Eve

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芝蔴街狂歡"趴踢" 員林奧大分校李依潔Eve

主題繪畫優等作品,西螺分校林子媛Sally

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盛夏的音樂會 西螺分校林子媛Sally

主題繪畫優等作品, 斗六分校蘇柏韋Wayne

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芝蔴街的生日派對 斗六分校蘇柏韋Wayne B. W. Su

主題繪畫優等作品,斗六分校薛子晴Sunny

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芝蔴街的生日派對 斗六分校薛子晴Sunny Z. C. Syue

主題繪畫優等作品,斗六分校陳羿瑋Jay

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芝麻街教室 斗六分校陳羿瑋Jay Y. W. Chen

主題繪畫優等作品,內壢分校呂紹瑜Evan

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我的芝蔴街 內壢分校呂紹瑜Evan

主題繪畫特優作品,員林奧大分校黃煜得Nathan

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來芝蔴街上學趣 員林奧大分校黃煜得Nathan

主題繪畫特優作品,員林奧大分校黃郁喬Zoe

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芝麻街萬歲! 員林奧大分校黃郁喬Zoe

主題繪畫特優作品,永平分校陳芃諭Mina

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Happy Party 永平分校陳芃諭 Mina Cheng

主題繪畫特優作品,斗六分校李惠君Sophia

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芝蔴街太空之旅 斗六分校李惠君Sophia H. J. Li

主題繪畫特優作品,大甲分校王彥勳Ian

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芝蔴街Elmo是我的家人 大甲分校王彥勳Ian Y. H. Huang

創作小書優等作品,東勢分校劉育昇 Sammy

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The King - 劉育昇 Sammy Y.S.Liu

Once upon a time, there was a king called Bob. People in the kingdom loved him very much. But one day, the people were so sad because the king got the lung cancer.

One day, the king commanded the soldiers to find the most famous one, but the doctor went traveling.

Therefore, the hopeless king asked another king Sam nearby to lend him the greatest doctor.

But Sam said, “ You have to give me half of your nation and I will lend you my greatest doctor.”

They bargained for one hour, but there was no agreement. So Bob gave up.

After that, he changed. When he went back to his country. He told his people not to pay tax anymore.

And he still gave three thousand dollars to the poor every week.

One day, when he walked around, he saw an old man sitting on a rock. The king asked him why he was sitting there.

The old man asked the king if he got the cancer. The king was surprised. Then the old man gave him a map “ The cure is on the map.” He said. “Why are you so nice to me?” Th…

創作小書優等作品,斗六分校葉凌均 Joyce

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Be careful what you wish for - 葉凌均 Joyce L.J.Yeh

There once lived two sisters, Amy and Anne, who were very different. Amy was beautiful with hair like the sun, and had hair like the night.

One day, when they were walking home from school, they found a book with magical spells in it.

Anne put the book in her bag and brought it home. She wanted to use the spells from the book, but Amy thought it was a bad idea.

Later that night while Amy was sleeping, Anne took the book and opened it.

She found a spell to make her beautiful, so she read the words out loud. (Anne : Magic!Magic! I want to be beautiful!)

The next morning, she wake up and became aware that something was wrong with Amy ; Amy was really weak and sick.

Anne tried to give her medicine, but nothing was working. (Anne : Magic!Magic! I want a medicine!)

The spell Anne used was taking Amy’s beauty and making her sick. Anne said,”I’m sorry,Amy. I love you.” She started to cry. (Anne : I’m sorry,Amy. I love you.)

All of a sudden, Anne’s tears st…

創作小書優等作品,東勢分校陳文彥 Wilton

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Adventure in Eygpt - 陳文彥 Wilton W.Y.Chen

Once upon a time in Egypt, there was a group of plotters going treasure hunting, but first of all, they had to have some lessons about the pyramids.

Before starting, Alan’s wife told him not to go because it was too dangerous. So Alan asked his wife to go with him, she said “No!” Alan’s wife told him to call her twice a day Alan agreed and started his adventure.

Their teacher, Doctor Tom told them “ There was treasure in the pyramid, but there was a gatekeeper protecting it. Let’s go find the treasure.” The leader of the explorer called Alan said, “Let’s go tomorrow.”

When they got to the pyramid, they opened the door. When they got in, the door closed quickly. All of them got scared. When Alan turned on the flashlight, he found that someone disappeared.

Alan told his teammates to calm down. This place had lots of traps and lots of snakes. So they decided to work together.

When they walked to another room, they saw a coffin. Suddenly, a mummy jumped …

創作小書優等作品,斗六分校林瑀倩Tiffany

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The Traveling Hamster - 林瑀倩 Tiffany Y.C.Lin

There was a hamster traveling the galaxy to eight planets.

First, she landed on “Water Planets”. Every thing she saw was made of water. She met some “water babies” and played happily with them. They even used water to write “water Planted”.

When she left there, the water babies gave her a “water Melon”.

Then, she arrived on Golf Planet. She felt surprised that everything was yellow. Whem she waled on Yellow Road, she fell and found a little gold.
Then she went ot a jewelry center.

She exchanged it at a jewelry center and got one cute yellow hat.

The third stop, she arrivied on Earth. She felt terrible and said, ”There are so many buildings here and the air isn’t fresh. I don’t like here!”

Next, she arrivied on - Wood Planet. It’s much more comfortable. I love here!” she said.
Everything was made of wood and that made her peaceful.

She quickly arrivied on Fire Planet. She felt so hot! All of the plants were dead. She looked into a pool and i…

創作小書優等作品,鹽行分校林詩涵Lin Shi Han

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I wish I could Be an Octopus - 林詩涵 Lin Shi Han

On a Summer day, I will become a junior high school student.

I heard that the days of high school will be very busy so I wish I would be an octopus.

An octopus has eight arms. If I had eight arms, my life would be much easier.

I could write homework eight times faster cook dinner, and do washing up at the same time.

Just like an octopus, I can be very strong. If any naughty boys trick me or bully me, I can use my powerful arms to tie them up to keep them from doing bad things.

When other think they are better than me, I can remember that I have an octopus spirit. I can be brave to fave NY CHAllenge.

I hope I can be like an octopus when I’m in high school, when I have a lot of stress at school. You see, octopus are very brave and fearless.

It’s useful to be an octopus because, if I want to skip class, I need to be sneaky so  the teacher won’t find out.
It might be a little bit naughty, but I guess it’s a good skill anyway.

They also learn…

創作小書特優作品,斗六分校郭玟廷Sunny

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Michelle’s Wish - 郭玟廷 Sunny W. T. Kuo

One night, Michelle was star gazing when she saw a shooting star.

She closed her eyes tight and wished for a unicorn.

After that, she went to bed and fell asleep.

The next morning when she woke up, she found a strange box next to her bed.

She opened the box and found a special surprise. It was an enormous unicorn with wings made of gold and a horn shine like a diamond. (Unicorn : Hello, my owner. My name is Bunny and I can take you to paradise! Would you like to go with me?)

(Unicorn : You are my owner, Don’t you trust me?!) Michell felt a little scared and asked if it promise not to hurt her.

Then, Michelle quickly climbed onto the unicorn’s back and shouted, “Let’s go!” (Unicorn : Let’s go!)

Bunny took Michelle over the rainbow where she saw many things like gold, diamond, toys and many more unicorns.

After 20 minutes… Michelle felt excited and amazed, but after twenty minutes she was bored. She asked Bunny if they could go somewhere new like MARS. Michelle : …

創作小書特優作品,後埔分校李佳薰 Sophie

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The Most Delicious Christmas cookie     by 李佳薰 Sophie J.X.Li (S215)

The little hamster Cathy : Yeah~~~ Today is Christmas Eve, so the teacher taught us to make five Christmas cookies. I will take them home and give them to my mom. Then, Cathy ran through the forest.

She saw a squirrel running around a tree and seemed to be having trouble. And she wanted to know what happened to the squirrel.

The squarriel cried and said : I forgot where I buried my pine cone. I will be hungry this Christmas.

Cathy felt pity for the squirrel, so she gave him a cookie. Squirrel : Thank you very much.

Cathy continued on her way home. After that, Cathy met a bird and her baby in their nest, but they looked very weak. Bird : The land was covered by snow. I couldn’t find seeds or worms to feed my baby. We are very hungry now.

Cathy : Don’t worry. I could share a cookie with you and your baby. Bird : Really thanks, you are so kind.

The cookies were getting fewer in the bag.
Cathy felt a little sad.

Suddenly, she saw a litt…

創作小書特優作品,斗六分校許琇喬Joy

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The Little Star - 許琇喬 Joy S.C.Syu

A long, long time ago, there was a little star in the sky.

The star thought it was so small no one would look at it. So, it asked a god to make it bigger. (The Star : I'm so small. Make me bigger, please.)
(The God : Okay.)

The god agreed and the little star began to grow but it wasn’t satisfied. (The star : I’m still so small.)

It wanted the god to make it larger than the moon. Again, the god agreed. (The star : Make me larger than the moon, please.) (The god : okay)

He made the little star larger than the moon, but the little star still wasn’t content. (The star : I’m still not large enough.)

Now, it asked the god to make it brighter than the sun. Once more, te god agreed. (The star : Make me brighter than the sun, please.) (The god : okay)

He made the little star brighter than the sun, but the little star wasn’t satisfied. (The star : I’m not content.)

This time, it requested to be the biggest star in the entire galaxy. The god agreed and turned the little atar i…